The end of the world’s fossil fuel resources and the subsequent changes will be a positive development in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Today’s
society
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overwhelmingly depends on products made from fossil
fuels
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. Most people would
initially
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think about fuel for
transport
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, but of course, fossil
fuels
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are part of most of the fabric of life around us, from the plastics on our furniture to the pavements that we walk on. Changing our reliance on these resources can have various consequences;
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, I believe that overall
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society
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will benefit from finding viable alternatives for them. Depending on whether eco-friendly alternatives are developed, the positive effect on
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and the reduction of the associated pollution will be significant. Exhaust fumes from motor vehicles, planes and ships decrease air quality and contribute to global warming and the greenhouse effect. People’s health and the health of the planet will surely improve without these industries relying on fossil
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. It could be that a type of
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crisis could develop
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if
society
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can no longer provide the
power
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to
transport
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so many individuals to where they want to go.
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,
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, does not have to be a bad thing, as it could force
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to use alternative solutions,
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as
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sharing and public
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development. The change in
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has already begun. Some countries have already committed to having fossil
fuel free
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and more cities are banning private vehicles from the centre of cities. Another positive development would be that more time and money would have to be put into developing renewable sources of energy,
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as wind
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, solar
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, hydropower and tidal
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. Technologies would improve and be more efficient and again, the world would use fewer sources of energy that cause pollution.
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development can
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be seen today, with many governments committing to proportions of their
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needs coming from renewable resources. I,
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, strongly agree with the statement that the changes from reducing reliance on fossil
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will be positive. The only caveat is that
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will need to have developed alternative sources of
power
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rather soon, in order to avoid an energy crisis.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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