It seems clear that obesity in today’s society is to some extent due to the availability of fast food. Should governments place a tax on fast food to reduce the amount of fast food consumed?
Nowadays obesity in society is an overwhelming problem. One of the main causes of obesity is the availability of fast
food
. Fast Use synonyms
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is popular since it is available everywhere on the street and is cheaper than other Use synonyms
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Also
, it is easier and faster to buy and eat in a limited time. The government can reduce the amount of Linking Words
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fast-food
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consumed by placing a Use synonyms
tax
on fast Use synonyms
food
.
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for example
, burgers and fries, is popular among children, teenagers and workers because it is the most affordable meal available and it is easy to find. Linking Words
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, it is easy to consume in a rush hour,Linking Words
for example
, eating in the car while travelling to places or eating in the office while working. With the Linking Words
tax
on fast Use synonyms
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, the amount of fast-Use synonyms
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consumed would be reduced because lesser Use synonyms
people
would be able to afford it.
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, fast Linking Words
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a source of Linking Words
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with low income so that they can pay lesser for Use synonyms
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. If the fast-Use synonyms
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such
as poverty and stealing Linking Words
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. The government should place a Use synonyms
tax
on fast Use synonyms
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but Use synonyms
also
should reduce the Linking Words
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on other types of healthy Use synonyms
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to make it more accessible for everyone, even with lower income. If more Use synonyms
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could afford healthier Use synonyms
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would be less obese.
In conclusion, in my opinion, governments should place a Use synonyms
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also
should promote and encourage Linking Words
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by reducing the Add the preposition
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on other healthy Use synonyms
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