Last month you had an overseas holiday with a friend from your college. They have just sent you some holiday photos together. In your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos Explain why you didn't write earlier. invite them to come and stay with you

Dear Mary, How are you doing? I trust you're well.
Last
month was the best month of my life! I enjoyed staying over for the summer break. Do you know I caught a cold right after I got home? I received the photos you sent to me via e-mail and I want to thank you so much for that. I had a lovely time with you and Agnes
last
holiday and I really appreciate that. I'm sorry I didn't send a message earlier when I got back to school. I had to complete the assignments I left undone to avoid unnecessary issues with my geography teacher,you remember the one I spoke about right? Well,I've always wanted to invite you over to my school, so, now is the right time.
This
will
also
be your
first
time in Lagos and I promise to make it worthwhile. Please let me know when you'll be willing to pay me a visit. You can inform Agnes as well because I'll be more than happy to host both of you. Take care my good friend and bye for now. With love, Dumebi.
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