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In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

#countries #food #outweigh
To begin
 with, a lot of
people
 live a busy lifestyle.As well as they use to eat fast
food
.
For
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hence
,fast
food
 is more available in the shops and is cheaper.
This
 adaptation is a serious problem for society.What is the reason for that?
Firstly
,
people
 are always searching the easy things and don't think the effect either is good or bad.
For
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hence
,the most of younger generation prefer to eat fast
food
 which are including many chemicals.Actually,parents must teach their children about the quality of
food
.If not a child will go the wrong way.When
people
 prefer to fast diet that may cause the biggest problem in the world.
For instance
,individuals may occur some diseases like high blood pressure,diabetic
mellitus
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 and cholesterol etc.In my opinion,it has no argument to tell fast
food
 do the disadvantages rather than advantages. In the past,our elderly
people
 have eaten high nutrition meals without chemicals that they grow.
On the other
hand
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 they have given an important
messege
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message
 to the human being.Not only that ,they lived
a
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healthy life.Nowadays Social media are promoting fast
food
.Because of that,some poolish
people
 believe that advertisement. To sum up,even though that fast
food
 is cheaper or high availability ,don't be cheated.
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