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These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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Nowadays, computers and telephones are popular among people,making it convenient to
work
 at
home
.
This
 essay will examine the advantages and
disadvantages
 of working at
home
 and provide a logical conclusion. Whilst acknowledging that there are benefits, the essay will argue that there are more drawbacks. Working at
home
 can cause some major
disadvantages
 like
the
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 drop
of
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work
 efficiency and the wrong recognition of yourself.
To begin
 with, amounts of people are not self-disciplined and digital products are just the source of it,which leads to the low efficiency while working. What’s
more
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,
long
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time
 of no company of workmates and the social can narrow down your view,giving rise to an illusion that you have done very well. But in
actual
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 world, you may have
leave
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 behind others a long way.
However
, the two main advantages of working at
home
 are
more
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 comfortable environment and less
time
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 on road.
Firstly
,
home
 is the most comfortable place to live for almost all people, where you can pay attention to yourself and leave out workmates’ views on you.
Secondly
, precious
time
 can be saved from working at
home
 ,
instead
 of taking a long trip to your company or school.
As a result
, you can spare
time
 to sleep,eat a healthy breakfast and do more jobs.
However
,
although
 you may feel well at
home
,
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that the attraction of digital products is much too more than working,
disadvantages
 can ruin your motivation for
work
.
To
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 conclusion,
although
 working at
home
make
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makes
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 you feel more comfortable, it can not be doubted the drawbacks weigh more
for
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 the low efficiency of
work
 and the wrong self-satisfactory feeling. So I believe that the
disadvantages
 are more than
advantages
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.
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