Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

It is being observed that after

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of

first

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punishment

, the intensity of committing

crime

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has increased in many

offenders

. The reasons why

this

phenomenon occurs are due to getting in contact with other

criminals

and a decrease in the

fear

of

punishment

among

offenders

.

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essay will delve deeper into these causes along with solutions related

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problem.

To begin

with, when many

criminals

complete their

first

punishment

, they may get closer to dangerous

criminals

in the prison.

Hence

, from there, heinous

criminals

easily change the mind of new

offenders

after

this

many

offenders

may try to plan big criminal activities.

In addition

, the

fear

of

punishment

can have the least impact on

offenders

if they complete their

first

punishment

without any difficulty by using money or power and

this

can increase the tendency to do the

crime

again and again in them. A survey conducted by Oxford University in March

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2015 that 35% chances of criminal activities had increased in many

offenders

when they got bailed due to their powerful contacts and money.

Consequently

, there are many solutions to cope with the issue. Primarily, after observing the extent of

crime

of many

offenders

, they should be sent to rehabilitation

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than directly to jails. Because

this

small change in their

first

punishment

not only makes them understand the meaning of

crime

but

also

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them to get involved in dangerous

criminals

.

Moreover

, departments related to law and prisons should be free from any external forces.

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, no political pressure or corruption in these systems can ramp up

fear

among

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offenders

. To conclude, it is unequivocal that though it is becoming a serious issue nowadays that many

offenders

incline towards

crime

again post

first

punishment

, they may have reasons

such

as less

fear

and attachment with other

criminals

;

however

, measures like no extra interference in judiciary and use of rehabilitation

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can solve the issue effectively.