Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

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punishment

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, the intensity of committing

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crime

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has increased in many

offenders

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. The reasons why

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phenomenon occurs are due to getting in contact with other

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and a decrease in the

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of

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essay will delve deeper into these causes along with solutions related

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problem.

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with, when many

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complete their

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first

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punishment

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, they may get closer to dangerous

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in the prison.

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, from there, heinous

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easily change the mind of new

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after

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many

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may try to plan big criminal activities.

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, the

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can have the least impact on

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if they complete their

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punishment

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without any difficulty by using money or power and

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can increase the tendency to do the

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again and again in them. A survey conducted by Oxford University in March

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2015 that 35% chances of criminal activities had increased in many

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when they got bailed due to their powerful contacts and money.

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, there are many solutions to cope with the issue. Primarily, after observing the extent of

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of many

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, they should be sent to rehabilitation

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than directly to jails. Because

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first

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punishment

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not only makes them understand the meaning of

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them to get involved in dangerous

criminals

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.

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, departments related to law and prisons should be free from any external forces.

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, no political pressure or corruption in these systems can ramp up

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offenders

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. To conclude, it is unequivocal that though it is becoming a serious issue nowadays that many

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incline towards

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again post

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punishment

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, they may have reasons

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as less

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and attachment with other

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;

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, measures like no extra interference in judiciary and use of rehabilitation

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can solve the issue effectively.