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Plastic bags, plastic bottle: and plastic packaging are bad for the environment What damage does plastic do (a mo environment? Whai can be done by governments and Individuals to solve this problem?

#plastic #bags #bottle #environment #damage #mo #whai #governments #individuals
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 government Should Help to grow up culture for
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use
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plastic
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 facilities and they should attempt to
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live environment . as you know some people have noT tendency for
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 to Keep
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environment
enviroment
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 theIr life and it's entirely hard to change for them
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Goverment
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Government
 can fix
this
 problem By new laws.
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An other
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 hand,We can don't
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plastic
 bagS When we are going to the shopping or Mall for bUy aNything's
a
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such
 as: fruit, food, vegetable or even clothes.
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people's
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 is better
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to
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a glass bottle
instead
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plastic
 bottle because
plastic
 is not renewable and
plastic
stay
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 in the
enviroment
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environment
 for many years. I think
government
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the government
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 for new and
regurd
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regard
 laws can help to make
new
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 style of life and people should help by don't
use
of
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plastic
 equipment and
insted
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instead
 of
paper
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bag
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bags
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 or glass
bottel
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bottle
 . when I go to the Natural attraction I have been a cleaning environment when I was 20 years. I believe is culture course has nice Earth
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