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In many countries household waste e.g food packaging is increasing day by day.What are the reasons ? How can this problem be solved

Nowadays, city dwellers have been producing more and more
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waste
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 in many countries,
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 as
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 packaging and plastic
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. In
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 essay, I will analyse the reasons and provide some suggestions. The reasons why there is numerous
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 are manifold. In the
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 place, the growth and improving economic environment in many countries have provided the public with a better living standard.
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, citizens have more extra money to buy clothes and
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 ,especially young
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 tend to buy a great number of junk foodstuff and snacks, as a consequence,
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 packaging is increasing day by day. In the
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 place, the modern society has put huge stress on
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, no matter for employees or students,
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 many
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 do not have time for cooking. Most of them only can buy some fast
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 or take away, which has led to producing more and more
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waste
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 as well.
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, a few measures can be well advised to solve
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 problem.
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, the government should increase the awareness of citizens about environmental protection, and encourage
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 to decrease
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 by living a sustainable lifestyle.
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, individuals should learn how to adjust to the pressure from work and study and try to keep a balance in
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.
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, cooking at home is a beneficial way to release stress and decrease
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waste
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 at the same time. To summarise, a better material environment and a stressful
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 may explain the reasons why there is more and more
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waste
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.
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, living a sustainable
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 and learning how to balance
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 for
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 can make a difference in
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumer culture
  • Convenience-driven lifestyle
  • Pre-packaged meals
  • Takeaway options
  • Recycling processes
  • Regulations
  • Landfills
  • Marketing strategies
  • Consumer behavior
  • Excessive packaging
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Sustainable practices
  • Educational campaigns
  • Eco-friendly choices
  • Government regulations
  • Incentives
  • Waste reduction
  • Sustainable packaging materials
  • Technology and infrastructure
  • Waste management systems
  • Advanced sorting technologies
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