IN SOME AREAS OF THE US, A CURFEW IS IMPOSED IN WHICH TEENAGERS ARE NOT ALLOWED TO BE OUT OF DOORS AFTER A PARTICULAR TIME IN NIGHT UNLESS THEY ARE ACCOMPAINED BY AN ADULT. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION ABOUT THIS?

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We have heard on news channels that there is some problem escalating in the US country. A number of clashes were reported between the police and local black residents,at multiple locations.

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, a lot of damage to the property occurred as well a few people's

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injured. To curb the situation, a curfew is imposed on the whole nation. I think the only solution to stop

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debacle immediately,is to anyhow understand the citizens to not come out of their houses until and unless they are in need of some urgent item. They are

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advised that youths are not allowed to be out at night hours after a particular time and if need they must be accompanied by their guardians with them.

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decision is very important because of two reasons.

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, the youngsters are the future of the nation so their safety is the prime responsibility to secure the state.

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, they can be easily manipulated by the situation and easily targeted by radical groups. In my opinion,if

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decision is temporary

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the public will obey and would not oppose

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. But if the centre would try to stretch or implement

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for a longer duration,

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their voters definitely do not like

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. Because anyhow you are encroaching on the freedom of your general public without their consent. And you can't force anything on anyone in democracy. The US is a democratic country and every citizen is smart enough to understand their rights and responsibilities. So government should try to make a proper announcement to aware the public that

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situation is temporary.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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269 words

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IN SOME AREAS OF THE US, A CURFEW IS IMPOSED IN WHICH TEENAGERS ARE NOT ALLOWED TO BE OUT OF DOORS AFTER A PARTICULAR TIME IN NIGHT UNLESS THEY ARE ACCOMPAINED BY AN ADULT. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION ABOUT THIS?

Fully explain your ideas

People aim to keep a balance between their work and other parts of their lives, but few people achieve it. What are the problems in trying to achieve this goal and how can these problems be overcome?

Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their home town. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: Explain why you were at the restaurant Describe the problems Write about action you want to manager to take

Some people enjoy change and they look forward to new experiences. Other like their lives to stay the same and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life and explain your perferance.

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.