Last month you had an overseas holiday with a friend from your college. They have just sent you some holiday photos together. In your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos Explain why you didn't write earlier. invite them to come and stay with you

Hi Dave, How's it going, mate? It's been like yesterday after I saw the photos that you sent to me. It was a precious moment that I got a chance to relieve away from the monotony of life. It was very generous of you that you could invite and allow me to stay over at your flat. I feel bad recently because I was lost in touch with you after that trip. Let me justify
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that, and don't get me wrong that I took advantage of you for the visit. I knew the incident of my sister's car accident after I had arrived back. I was dreadful about my sister and running between hospital and home.
However
, she gets back in a good form now. I was wondering if you could visit back to me in
next
holiday. I am always welcoming to show you all around my country. I would
also
invite your parents too if they could spare some time to do it. I look forward to hearing positive replies from you. Best wishes, Tun Naung Win
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