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The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public. To what extent do you agree?

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Searching for other
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 of
life
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 on new
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 has caused a never-ending controversy as the government spends too much
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 on discovering new
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 of
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 outside
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. Among people are some who opine that
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 are wasting our
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 by conducting research outside our planet and governments should devote these resources to solving problems on
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 that could benefit their citizens. In my opinion,
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 looking for other unknown
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 of
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 on other
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 might inspire many to achieve their goal, I completely agree that
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 is a waste of
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 and
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 should have devoted these funds to
improving
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 the
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 on
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 for two reasons that I will
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, one reason why I opine that
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 are wasting our resources by spending a lot to discover other
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 of
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 on different
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 is that many demographic places in our nation still lack substantial infrastructure.
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, in light of coronavirus, we discovered that our health care systems are unable to provide effective services to citizens during emergencies.
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, if more funds had been spent on improving the existing infrastructure, difficulties during emergencies could have been avoided. For
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 reason, I believe that funding crucial infrastructure projects on
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 is more beneficial.
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, another thing worth considering is that our
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 is suffering from major difficulties
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 as global warming, which should be the most pressing issue in
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 era. Owing to the fact that it poses a direct threat to mankind.
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, global warming is causing some disruption to the lives of many marine creatures, which negatively impacts our food chain.
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, many unprecedented actions might occur in the not-too-distant future. It is
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 recommended that
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 have to adopt a more serious action and direct their available resources to solve the most pressing issues on
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. In conclusion, too much
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 has been directed to discovering new
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 of
life
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 on other
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. I add my voice to those who opine that
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 is a waste of
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 and that governments should concentrate on spending
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 that would improve the standard of living for many.

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