Last month you had an overseas holiday with a friend from your college. They have just sent you some holiday photos together. In your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos Explain why you didn't write earlier. invite them to come and stay with you

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Hi Dave, How's it going, mate? It felt like it just happened yesterday after I got the photos of us you sent me. It was a precious moment which allowed me to get away from the monotony of life. It was very generous of you that you invited and allowed me to stay over at your flat during our vacation. I feel bad recently because I lost touch with you after that trip. Let me justify that, and please don't get me wrong that I took advantage of you during the visit. I got to know about my sister's car accident after I had arrived back. I was dreadful about my sister and running between hospital and home.

However

, she gets back home now in good form. I wanted to invite you if you could visit back to me

holiday. I am always welcoming to show you all around my country. I would request your parents

also

if they could spare some time to do it. I am looking forward to hearing positive replies from you. Best wishes, Tun Naung Win

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8 paragraphs

182 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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