you live near a public school. the school has asked local residents to help with the maintenance of school buildings and play area. Write a letter to the principal. in your letter, -explain why you would like to help -tell them how you can help -let them know when you are available

Dear Sir, With due respect, I am Harry, my house is adjacent to the northwest wall of your Saint Thomes
school
. Through
this
letter, I would like to show my willingness towards the notice from your
school
about assistance in the maintenance of
school
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building
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buildings

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and
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playground

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play ground
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from the residents. At the onset, I am interested
into
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providing my help in
this
particular task because I feel proud if I impart my prowess in grass cutting to the
school
. As I am a member of
local
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environment
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protection union, I can guide students
about
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on

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how to maintain a clean atmosphere
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on

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the
school
premises. Not only can I help to collect some funds for the
school
by using my union contacts, but
also
I love to cut the excess grass from
school
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the school

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ground and near
to
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apply

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building
number
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numbers

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3 to 5.
In addition
, I have
special
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a special

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grass cutter which can save a lot of time.
Lastly
, because I work as a manager in Woodera company, I can only be available on weekends or before for one hour in the mornings from 6 am to 7 am. If you allow me to utilize
this
time to maintain the beauty of the best
school
of
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our town, it will be
appriciated
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appreciated

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a lot. Look forward to
hearning
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hearing

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from you soon. Yours faithfully, Harry Brown
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