In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
We are living in an era where technology has developed dramatically, leading to an increase in agricultural productivity in many
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shortage and famine still occurs. In my opinion, the causes leading to the above situations come from many different aspects.
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with slow growth rates, they do not have enough money to invest in modern machinery and equipment, making agricultural production more difficult and time-consuming. Geographic location and weather are one of the important factors in the agricultural development of some Use synonyms
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