Last month you had an overseas holiday with a friend from your college. They have just sent you some holiday photos together. In your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos Explain why you didn't write earlier. invite them to come and stay with you

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Hi Cartoon and Sasi, How are you doing? It was a very precious moment while we were in Spain. I want to thank you for your kindness and helpfulness during our trip

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all the photos are incredibly beautiful. I could not imagine how I would have fun without you guys. I was close to the final exam after we were separated and

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why I did not write to you earlier. I hope you did not feel bad about it. One more thing, I just moved to a new apartment and want to have a small party with you two. The party will

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on Sunday 13th August

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room 456 New Street road. I will probably cook some Japanese food and make some Danish pastries, so If you want something

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just let me know and I will try to prepare them. Looking forward to hearing from you and thanks again for the wonderful trip. Best Wishes,

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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