In some countries, online shopping is getting more popular and replacing shopping in stores. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
The plural verb make does not appear to agree with the singular subject this. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
It seems that the verb go does not agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.
The noun phrase unknown website seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that website may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
If you don’t want advantags to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.
The word ordered doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
It seems that website may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example