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As well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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It is commonly true that all businesses are relying on the social community. Being making a profit, the
company
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 should take care of the effect that can harm the public. I agree with the foregoing statement and in
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 should come out the strategies for both the community and the
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. The most predominant reason is that there is no
company
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 that can stand without public support.
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, the drinking water bottle
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produces their
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 at reasonable prices as well as maintains their purification level to serve for people to be healthy.
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, they should show the
customer
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 benefits which means that their product is outstanding among the competitor
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.
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, the people will see the care from
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company
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 and
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 they will buy these
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products
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 that can increase the
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 profit. On the other side, the social environment can knock down the
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. There is no doubt that the
business
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 cannot stand any longer if the
company
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 is not interested in public requirements.
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, the
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 bought their
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 at a high price but the quality is not much different from other
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.
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, if the people think that the
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 is cheating the
customer
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 later they disseminate
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 information from their online group. If the
company
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 can't stop before it spread the news that will be too late to control the
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's reputation. As a consequence, the
business
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 will bankrupt or shut down the operation. To sum up,
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, all the businesses are affording revenue not only concentrating on profits but
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 taking care of
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 benefits. Personally, I agree that if the
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 is looking forward to
customer
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 satisfaction rather than their profits their reputation will stand longer.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social responsibilities
  • contribute
  • well-being
  • community
  • philanthropy
  • sustainability
  • ethical
  • trust
  • reputation
  • accountable
  • profit-making
  • balance
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