Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes.

Nowadays, there is no doubt, that money is
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a vital requirement in life for
people
and the nation. While some certain individuals think that making a proper contribution to
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society have achieved from a major sauce of tax payment by each citizen. Others claim that they can fulfil more energy incredible
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for success. In my opinion, I believe, as the latter view helps more productively in
this
phenomenon. On the
first
hand, those who argue that paying taxes certain offers a large proportion to the community as it is a crucial financial resource to authorities for developing the country.
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, In India, which has
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, some of the districts had fewer
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collected by the authority’s administration, simultaneously, the minister of the area has struggled to give budgets to manage education, payment for teacher’s
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and controle pandemic health issues in that community.
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in the literacy rate had fallen and lacked expensive medicines in the local hospitals end of the year 2020 due to unable import
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some medications. Another
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expectation that taxes is that strongly taking part
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making new
infrastructors
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infrastructures
infrastructure
such
as making comfortable highways, railway
comstructions
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constructions
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and
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development
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for the
people
, because without better roads means civilians and noncitizens are facing more problems for transportation to reach destination fastly,
as a
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they stuck on the
on the
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way most of the time in the day and
this
traffic
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, leads to many
ways
giving problems for them, as
fequently
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frequently
occuring
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occurring
accidents some times and attending late for their work as well as they get
eimotional
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emotional
situations.
On the other hand
, that
second
phenomenon as
people
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vast responsibilities from another a few
ways
of
contribution
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to the nation.
Firstly
, by
people
abide their national rules and regulations in each adult.
For instance
, when
people
follow the
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fundamental policy and pedestrians obey their duties as well, in resulting,
annual
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accidental rate will have fallen drastically and the mortality rate will be rise.
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, if the drivers or passengers do not follow their written rules, it
effect
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harmfully for their families
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giving difficulties in different
ways
.
Moreover
, citizens are accountable for giving their hands
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villages and cities as they should use environmentally friendly products for daily use, green plantations and
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keeping clean and tidy of public places.
This
gives depletion of
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for adults and children
such
as allergy, obesity and
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cardio vascular
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diseases. In conclusion,
nevertheless
, while paying taxes each adult is contributing
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various
ways
to the society,
also
people
’s other social
intervention
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interventions
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such
as following native rules and reducing
pollutions
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are
also
important to consider
into
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account.
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