Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes.

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and the nation. While some certain individuals think that making a proper contribution to

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society have achieved from a major sauce of tax payment by each citizen. Others claim that they can fulfil more energy incredible

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for success. In my opinion, I believe, as the latter view helps more productively in

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hand, those who argue that paying taxes certain offers a large proportion to the community as it is a crucial financial resource to authorities for developing the country.

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, some of the districts had fewer

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collected by the authority’s administration, simultaneously, the minister of the area has struggled to give budgets to manage education, payment for teacher’s

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and controle pandemic health issues in that community.

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in the literacy rate had fallen and lacked expensive medicines in the local hospitals end of the year 2020 due to unable import

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some medications. Another

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expectation that taxes is that strongly taking part

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making new

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, because without better roads means civilians and noncitizens are facing more problems for transportation to reach destination fastly,

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accidents some times and attending late for their work as well as they get

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vast responsibilities from another a few

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to the nation.

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abide their national rules and regulations in each adult.

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follow the

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fundamental policy and pedestrians obey their duties as well, in resulting,

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accidental rate will have fallen drastically and the mortality rate will be rise.

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harmfully for their families

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giving difficulties in different

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, citizens are accountable for giving their hands

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villages and cities as they should use environmentally friendly products for daily use, green plantations and

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keeping clean and tidy of public places.

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gives depletion of

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for adults and children

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diseases. In conclusion,

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, while paying taxes each adult is contributing

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to the society,

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’s other social

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as following native rules and reducing

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account.