Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patient do not follow an exercise routine. what do you think why this happens? how people can be encouraged to exercise regularly?
It is often advised by most
of
the clinicians to the elderly Change preposition
apply
people
to perform exercises
on the
routine basis but Correct article usage
a
majority
of them fail to do so.Add an article
the majority
a majority
This
essay will discuss various reasons responsible for this
and how people
can be motivated to work out daily.
Undoubtedbly
, exercise plays a pivotal role in maintaining Correct your spelling
Undoubtedly
healthy
lifestyle for every Add an article
a healthy
age
group. Although
, older people
are more encouraged by the doctors for doing exercises
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exercise
,
because most Remove the comma
apply
of
the ailments Change preposition
apply
such
as diabetes, high cholesterol, cardiac
problems are Correct word choice
and cardiac
age associated
. Add a hyphen
age-associated
However
, majority
of them are unable to exercise Correct article usage
the majority
regulary
. Correct your spelling
regularly
This
could be due to many reasons such
as poor dexterity, joint
and muscle pain and apparently they feel more fatigue as compared to Correct word choice
and joint
younger
Correct article usage
the younger
age
group. In addition
to this
aging
results in behaviour changes. Change the spelling
ageing
For instance
, many studies have proved that old age
individuals are more stubborn as compared to middle or younger age
group. Hence
, they do not like to follow the recommendations, even if it is prescribed by the doctors for their own good.
However
, many measures can be taken by the governing bodies as well as the communities to inspire aging
Change the spelling
ageing
people
to perform exercises
. Firstly
, the government should consider on
building more public parks, walking pathways as well as sports centres for the senior citizens. Change preposition
apply
Secondly
, family and friends should also
persuade elderly people
to perform exercises
by making them aware of its health benefits. For instance
, in India maily
in the urban areas, in the living Correct your spelling
mainly
societies
Add a comma
,societies
people
have started laughter clubs where not only the old age
people
cherish but also
exercise on the
routine basis.Correct article usage
a
Therefore
, both the government and people
should make efforts to teach aged individuals the value of working out.
In the conclusion, although
pertaining to old age
and many health related
problems, individuals fail to follow Add a hyphen
health-related
doctors
recommendations on routine Change noun form
doctors'
doctor's
exercises
. But with combined efforts of the government and people
as well as medical professionals this
problem can be resolved and elderly
can be guided to do Correct article usage
the elderly
exercises
to maintain a healthy life.Submitted by drvishal13 on
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