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Grandparents play a big role in the bringing up their grandchildren. Do you think it it useful for grandparents to be involved ? what is your opinion.

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It is undeniable fact that
grandparents
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 can play an indispensable part in the bringing up their
children
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. In fact,
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 role is quite impactful as a
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supporter
, motivator and teacher.
This
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To begin
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 with, if
grandparents
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 contribute a considerable part in raising their
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, they can provide their support to them. To explain,
grandparents
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 can give
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financial support
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 the family and to their
grandchildren
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 too which can make them able to deal with the hard times by using their pensions and other sources.
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, not only do
grandparents
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 can help their
grandchildren
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 by giving them money
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 but
also
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 there is no need to appoint a person to babysit the
grandchildren
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. A survey conducted by Oxford University in March
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 2015
that
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manifestly revealed that 65% of parents accepted the fact that
grandparents
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 helped in
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babysitting their
children
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 which saved a lot of their money.
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, since
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 have had prowess
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 many pragmatic situations, during the bringing up their
grandchildren
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, they can share their experiences with them.
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,
this
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 may help their
grandchildren
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 in
various
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way
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ways
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 like to deal
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 pressure of studies and to take the decision wisely.
In addition
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,
grandparents
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 can be the good companion
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 their
grandchildren
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 and in a friendly
way
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grandparents
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 can teach them many social and domestic skills.
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, cooking, co-operation, and table manners. To conclude, it is unequivocal that
grandparents
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 have a significant role in the bringing up their
children
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. I believe their presence, during
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grandchildren
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towards
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 the right
directions
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direction
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.
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