Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Nowadays,

people

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living in major cities are not familiar with their

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. The main reasons for

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issue could be high population cities and changing houses more frequently.

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, residents can still know their

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by meeting them which I explain more about it in

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essay. As

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is considerably huge in urban areas,

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do not have the chance to meet the local

people

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living near their houses. At the same time, the number of homes has increased, which results in not visiting

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even one, most of the time

people

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are not sure who their

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are.

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, the number of moving the living places has grown remarkably. Many humans move to a new area

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because they had

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their home previously or immigrate to another town,

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country.

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, they could not have enough time to

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interaction with their

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and

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communication with them.

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living condition

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these days does not provide

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for

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to know each other, they can hold some

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events to see each other. By attending local events,

people

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can speak and even make new friends.

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, some

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citizens can arrange some

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or cultural ceremonies;

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, locals are invited and attracted to join. In conclusion,

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lives make

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not to know each other in a living district,

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cities have enlarged in

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of residents.

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people

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vary their living location more often than in the past.

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, I believe by holding local events, they can tackle

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issue.

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May 14, 2022

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Topic Vocabulary:

sense of community
isolation
loneliness
support network
sense of security
trust
cooperation
social support
integration
community events
shared spaces
neighborly interactions
neighborhood watch programs
community engagement
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