Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

living in major cities are not familiar with their
. The main reasons for
issue could be high population cities and changing houses more frequently.
, residents can still know their
by meeting them, which I explain more about it in
essay. As the population is considerably huge in urban areas,
do not have the chance to meet the local
living near their houses. At the same time, the number of homes has increased, which results in not visiting
even once; most of the time,
are not sure who their
, the number of moving the living places has grown remarkably. Many humans move to a new area because they had rented their home previously or immigrated to another town and country.
, they could not have enough time to interact with their
and communicate with them.
living condition these days does not provide the opportunity for
to know each other, they can hold some neighbourhood events to see each other. By attending local events,
can speak and even make new friends.
For instance
, some neighbourhood citizens can arrange some competitions or cultural ceremonies;
as a result
, locals are invited and attracted to join. In conclusion, today's lives make
not know each other in a living district, and capital cities have enlarged the number of residents.
In addition
vary their living location more often than in the past.
, I believe that by holding local events, they can tackle
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