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In some countries, an increasing number of children are overwehight or obese as a result of eating too much fast food. Banning fast food from shcool canteen is the best way to fight this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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These days fat children constitute to increase in some countries. Some of that reasons are school cooking. So, fast food should be forbidden to fix that issue. I totally agree with
this
.
This
 essay will discuss the main idea and will draw my conclusion.
This
 debatable problem, meals are one of the most important things to keep kids having a healthy life. On one hand, the usual time to go to study is, in the morning
that is
 mean they will have breakfast. So,
that is
 the
first
 thing they are going to eat.
Also
, the brain's strengths need something to make them focus and active.
For example
, anything has protein resources like eggs to charge their energy.
Moreover
,
that is
 a long time in school-place they should have foodstuff to stay awake as much as in that period without the need to eat other unhealthy stuff, like oatmeal with honey and some snacks for the middle of the morning as fruits with some nuts.
This
 proves clearly
that is
 parents' mission.
On the other hand
, the management of the canteen eatables sells to studies harmful stuff, especially that aliment with colores add.
For instance
, children after eating those immediately get extra vitality but, in a short time opposite the healthy stuff.
Hence
 the belief that could make a real problem inside their bodies if no one changes it to sell clean fare. After a careful analysis of
this
 case, I believe that it is huge responsibility should of both sides to handle it inside the school and family on the outside.
In addition
, teach them that healthy food is delicious and to grow up with a strong and healthy body and mental.
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