Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. which do you consider to be the major influence?

Human
personality
and
development
have always been a mystery to scientists. Recent
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has shown that human
genes
have
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impact on people than the environment.
However
, while I believe that the effects of DNA on people's
personality
and
development
can not be underestimated, the role environment plays is equally effective. There are valid points in favour of
effects
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the effects

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of
genetical
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factors. One can take the example of
personality
disorders that run in families. It has been proved that
genes
are playing important roles in conditions like obsessive-compulsive disorders (OCDs) and the chance for a child born from a female with
this
condition having
this
personality
is phenomenal. Added to
this
, the effects of DNA on the
development
of a child have been proven by
studying
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on
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twins. There is a well-known case of twins who were brought up in two different countries but have
same
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developmental milestones like delayed speech.
Therefore
,
genes
and inherited factors have
great
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impact on human features . Having said that, the impact of the environment on humans is irrefutable.
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, the recent pandemic has resulted in
growth
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of the prevalence of
OCDs
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OCD

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in individuals with a negative family history.
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is because
,
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they experienced a period of cleaning every single stuff and washing their hands continuously which resulted in being
obssesive
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obsessive

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about it.
Besides
that, the
development
of children is
considerabley
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considerably

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influenced by their experiences.
For example
, the mean height in Korea has increased after the addition of activities like basketball to educational curriculums
although
they had received
genes
from a generation with a shorter mean height. To sum up, both
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and environmental factors can affect the
personality
and
development
of an individual. I believe that neither of them can solely indicate what
charactristics
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characteristics

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a child is going to develop.
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