You Travelled by Plane Last Week, and Your Suitcase Was Lost. You Have Still Heard Nothing from The Airline Company. Write to The Airline and Explain What Happened. Describe Your Suitcase and Tell Them What Was in It. Find out What They Are Going to Do About It.

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Dear Manager, I am Fellow Morgan (Passport No: 123456),a passenger who travelled by flight U380 from New Jersey to Newyork and I am writing

this

letter as a follow-up to the formal complaint I made a week ago at the NewYork airport on 27th of October 2022 as I have not heard back from you. Let me explain what happened. I boarded the flight around 8.00 PM on the 26th of June with two suitcases one was red and the other one was black. I checked in both these pieces of

luggage

at the reception. The black one contained three denim pants, innerwear, towels, important documents and my hotel pass which were wrapped by a large blanket.

In addition

, it had a yellow name tag with

further

details which could help to identify the

luggage

. Could you please let me know the exact tracking status of my

luggage

I need the

luggage

urgently within three days to attend a meeting and stay at the hotel I already booked. I hope you will kindly consider my request positively and update me as soon as possible. I will eagerly be waiting for your response. Thanks for your kind consideration. Yours faithfully, Fellow Morgan

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Consider adding more details about how you tried to communicate with the airline so far.

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Add a more specific description of the suitcases—like brand or any distinctive feature.

task achievement

The writing tone is formal and polite, which is suitable for a letter to an airline.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has clear paragraphs with a structured flow of information.

3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

201 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

flight itinerary
baggage claim
missing luggage
distinguishing features
high-value items
sentimental value
compensation policy
alternative measures
regular updates
trace the case
inquire
express dissatisfaction

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