Nowadays celerities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development.

In the modern era, it is generally acknowledged that the number

of

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incomes of

people

who are famous is bigger than that of

politicians

because

celebrities

have

advertising

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effect

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and have done a lot of effort.

This

is a beneficial progression as they can contribute to the country and the public’s awareness.

To begin

with, an excessive amount of practice is required to be successful stars, and

therefore

the population is impressed

at

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their hard training.

Therefore

,

people

tend to

willing

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to pay

money

for their

celebrities

. A majority of Koreans love to pay

money

for Yuna Kim who is a successful figure skater since the Korean public saw her feet that are hurt by her practice when she was young.

Moreover

, due to the attention of citizens,

celebrities

can gain excessive

money

. While the public

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to think that

politicians

are boring, they believe that popular

people

who are singers, actors, and athletes are interesting. What is more, the population wants to be like them.

As a result

, the attention of the public brings about an advertising effect.

For example

, a post

that is

written by Hae Gyo Song, who is a popular actor in Korea, is valued at

arround

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around

500,000 dollars.

Hence

, their popularities are the key factor in advertising that brings enormous incomes.

However

, these trends contribute to the country. Not only can word-wide stars earn

money

from the local population, but they may

also

get

money

from fans all over the world.

As a result

,

celebrities

have to pay taxes that increase

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standard of living as the government can allocate state funds that are collected by taxes to public services.

In addition

, if VIPs are sympathetic or want to have a good reputation, they would donate to charities or participate in volunteering for the community. Since the public

tend

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to mimic their

favorite

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people

,

such

a kind trend will be spread among ordinary

people

.

For instance

, a survey conducted by Korea University has revealed that

celebrities

’

behaviors

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are more powerful than

politicians

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words.

Hence

, earning a lot of

money

among stars is

a

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development progress. In conclusion,

celebrities

are

more

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richer than

politicians

since the public

are

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impressed

at

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stars’ efforts and they can

also

advertise efficiently. Their

money

can be used for the country with the population’s participation.