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Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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There are so many
types
 of
movies
, but,the two genres of
movies
 are debatable. The
first
 is a historical
film
 and the
second
comedy
film
. It is widely accepted by some
people
 that a tragedy type of
movie
 can affect
people
's minds in a deep way, while
comedy
 is the best way to reduce stress and strain. According to my point of view, I not only like to watch suspense
movies
 but
also
 like to watch entertainment
movies
. I would discuss
this
 in the following paragraphs. It is indisputable fact that laughter is the best medicine. So, the amusement and
comedy
types
 of
movies
 are the best in order to reduce stress and strain.
For example
, according to a "
Movie
 Buddy" survey, the majority of employees who go to the theatre to watch these
types
 of
movies
 twice a week, since after watching these
movies
, they feel relaxed and forget their workload. Personally, I go to the cinema twice a month for watching these kinds of
movies
, because I feel better and enjoy myself.
However
, I
also
 like to watch serious kinds of films, since I think sometimes it made me crazy to think.
For example
,
last
 time, I watched the
film
 "Traffic", which was based on drugs and young
people
. In
this
film
, it had been shown many 21st century teenagers were involved in drugs and alcohol and
also
 shown they did involve these
types
 of crimes for getting luxury lifestyle. So, according to my point of view, every parent should watch that
movie
 and discuss the important aspect of it with their children. In conclusion, I think that every kind of
movie
 has been made on the uniqueness,
such
 as the purpose of making a
comedy
 is to laugh at the audience, while a serious kind of
movie
 has been engaged
people
 to think about.
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