A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject . Write a letter to your friend.in your letter Give details of the course you took at school Explain why you recommend the university Give some advice on how to apply
Dear Jane,
I am pleased to know that you are now ready to apply for your undergraduate study. I
also
understand that you are interested in studying a medical course just like I did. However
, I have a few recommendations to give in order to guide your choices.
Meanwhile, I need you to know that I studied Medicine and Surgery at the University
of Lagos, and there are intricacies you need to note. One
is that,
Medicine is a very delicate program which requires passion and zeal. If you fail a course, you would need to re-sit it and if you fail again, you would have to repeat the whole year. Remove the comma
apply
Also
, it is a six-year training with intensive clinical rotation at a registered teaching hospital. Therefore
, it can be very stressful and demanding as there is only a little vacation break at the end
of the year.
Anyways, the University
of Lagos is definitely one
the best places to train to become a Doctor for a few reasons, The most important one
is that, It is situated in a lively city with several fun activities to catch up with. So, in case you need to unwind, you will have varieties to pick from. Additionally
, Lagos University
Teaching Hospitals is one
of the best medical training centres in the country, and you can be guaranteed of quality learning experience.
To Submit an application, you would have to create an account on the university
portal, I'll send the link to your mail. After that, you would fill out the online form and attach the necessary requested documents. Following
this
, you will get a confirmation mail which will instruct you on further
steps.
I believe this
information is enough to make use of and I can't wait to see you resume your study.
Warm regards,
Moses.Submitted by peteromisakin on
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coherence cohesion
Try to break down the information into more concise paragraphs or points to improve clarity.
task achievement
Consider providing a bit more detail about specific aspects of the application process to make it clearer.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately friendly and warm, suitable for a letter to a friend.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is very suitable for the purpose of giving advice to a friend, which makes it engaging.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite