In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, more and more

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are obese and

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leads to serious health problems.

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I accept that the

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are responsible for the health issue of the

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, I believe the authority should share a major part in the problem.

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of all, it is reasonable for me to believe that the idea of promoting the significance of leading a healthy lifestyle should be done by the

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. If schoolchildren are educated about the harms of becoming fat

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as the risks of cardiovascular diseases and inconvenient movement, and the ways of eating healthily through propaganda from the regime, they may try to avoid having too much junk

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and substitute it with light snacks like fruit due to media effects. Encouraging students to do exercise can

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be seen in school when the

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reforms physical education.

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, introducing different sports and increasing the time required for exercising at school to regulate

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working out more,

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of glueing on their assignments only. These can only be done by the

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. On the other side, some people believe

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should tackle toddlers' overweigh. Since

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are the one who arranges the diet and schedule for

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, they are easier to correct

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unhealthy habits.

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, never should we overlook that

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may not have enough enforcement power .

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, not only can youngsters buy junk

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after school with their pocket money, but they may

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rebel against their

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by not following their orders and making their relationships tenser.

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, the

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can mitigate the issue with greater effectiveness. According to the successful examples in Norway, which sets up an obese tax for high fat and sugar

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as chocolate and potato chips, gives great deterrent effect to the citizens in consuming more junk

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.

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, these examples are significant tract to be considered from

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's perspective. To conclude, due to the aforementioned argument, we can safely conclude that the state is the major stakeholder in alleviating the issue. I strongly recommend the authority should take action to reduce the number of

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cases in society.