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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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With an economic revolution and with the development of lifestyle these days anyone can find out what he wants without headache. And by one click on a button can choose and be happy with what he likes and preferences.
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 many numbers of
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 numbers of research will be easier and more than before . In , the future the life of new generations of human beings will be more fun than before because
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 lot
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 will be available in front of their eyes. On the other ,hand many people don't know how to deal with technology ,especially the elderly,
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 they have weak vision with the reflection of the light screen so they are fighting to read what they want and
also
 we can find some people with elderly miss to the memories in their past whenever they were reading
newspapers
 in their emotional places like works and their office so that they prefer to use printed materials rather than online reading. When we think about these people we can say that the world is divided into two sides, one applies who prefers online reading and the other applicants who like the old way like printed
newspapers
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conclusion in spite of the spread of technology and digital media we can see many numbers of human beings prefer printed
newspapers
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