More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are the possible solutions?
Many
people
living in developing
Add an article
a developing
country
, buy Fix the agreement mistake
countries
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an automobile
automobile
for the Fix the agreement mistake
automobiles
first
time. It means that many residents cannot buy cars
which results in Correct article usage
an increasing
increasing
crime rate and Replace the word
increased
restrict
dreams. Wrong verb form
restricting
However
, government
can provide Add an article
the government
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an opportunity
the opportunity
opportunity
for their Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
people
to help them buy a means of transportation easily.
A country with worse
economic situation in which Correct article usage
a worse
people
lived there buy
Wrong verb form
buying
cars
for the first
time, cause
increasing robbery on the other side. In Wrong verb form
causing
these
Correct determiner usage
this
society
Add a comma
,society
people
cannot generally afford to buy a car. Consequently
, many of them would encourage to steal them. moreover
, citizens of that society would decrease the level of their willing
to Replace the word
willingness
having
a car. Wrong verb form
have
In
a consequence, they do not dream bigChange preposition
As
,
and try to improve their living condition significantly, since they will never think about Remove the comma
apply
achieve
high welfare.
Wrong verb form
achieving
However
, by taking some actions, authorities may tackle this
problem. many cannot afford to purchase vehicles as they are expensive. Nevertheless
, by cutting down prices, everyone would own it. in addition
, governors would much
better off importing cheap Add a missing verb
be much
cars
from other countries,
or Remove the comma
apply
bring
industrial engineering to build less pricy Wrong verb form
bringing
cars
. As a result
, these items would not turn to
something costly to have. In general, raising income can solve Change preposition
into
this
issue immediately, which require
a proper country economy.
In conclusion, Correct subject-verb agreement
requires
cars
in many developing societies have bought
for the Add a missing verb
been bought
first
time. It can rise crime
rate or make adults, especially youngsters, Correct article usage
the crime
to
limit their wants Fix the infinitive
apply
from
their future lives. Fortunately, humans leading these countries can order to reduce the cost of Change preposition
in
provide
affordable Change the verb form
providing
cars
for their people
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