More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are the possible solutions?

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people

living in

developing

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a developing

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country

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countries

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, buy

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an automobile

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automobile

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automobiles

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for the

first

time. It means that many residents cannot buy

cars

which results in

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increasing

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crime rate and

restrict

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dreams.

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,

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the government

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can provide

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an opportunity

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opportunity

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opportunities

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for their

people

to help them buy a means of transportation easily. A country with

worse

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economic situation in which

people

lived there

buy

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buying

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cars

for the

first

time,

cause

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increasing robbery on the other side. In

these

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society

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people

cannot generally afford to buy a car.

Consequently

, many of them would encourage to steal them.

moreover

, citizens of that society would decrease the level of their

willing

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to

having

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a car.

In

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a consequence, they do not dream big

,

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and try to improve their living condition significantly, since they will never think about

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high welfare.

However

, by taking some actions, authorities may tackle

this

problem. many cannot afford to purchase vehicles as they are expensive.

Nevertheless

, by cutting down prices, everyone would own it.

in addition

, governors would

much

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better off importing cheap

cars

from other countries

,

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or

bring

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industrial engineering to build less pricy

cars

.

As a result

, these items would not turn

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something costly to have. In general, raising income can solve

this

issue immediately, which

require

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a proper country economy. In conclusion,

cars

in many developing societies have

bought

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been bought

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for the

first

time. It can rise

crime

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the crime

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rate or make adults, especially youngsters,

to

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limit their wants

from

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their future lives. Fortunately, humans leading these countries can order to reduce the cost of

provide

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affordable

cars

for their

people

.