More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are the possible solutions?
Many
people
living in Use synonyms
developing
Add an article
a developing
country
, buy Fix the agreement mistake
countries
Add an article
an automobile
automobile
for the Fix the agreement mistake
automobiles
first
time. It means that many residents cannot buy Linking Words
cars
which results in Use synonyms
Correct article usage
an increasing
increasing
crime rate and Replace the word
increased
restrict
dreams. Wrong verb form
restricting
However
, Linking Words
government
can provide Add an article
the government
Add an article
an opportunity
the opportunity
opportunity
for their Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
people
to help them buy a means of transportation easily.
A country with Use synonyms
worse
economic situation in which Correct article usage
a worse
people
lived there Use synonyms
buy
Wrong verb form
buying
cars
for the Use synonyms
first
time, Linking Words
cause
increasing robbery on the other side. In Wrong verb form
causing
these
Correct determiner usage
this
society
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,society
people
cannot generally afford to buy a car. Use synonyms
Consequently
, many of them would encourage to steal them. Linking Words
moreover
, citizens of that society would decrease the level of their Linking Words
willing
to Replace the word
willingness
having
a car. Wrong verb form
have
In
a consequence, they do not dream bigChange preposition
As
,
and try to improve their living condition significantly, since they will never think about Remove the comma
apply
achieve
high welfare.
Wrong verb form
achieving
However
, by taking some actions, authorities may tackle Linking Words
this
problem. many cannot afford to purchase vehicles as they are expensive. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, by cutting down prices, everyone would own it. Linking Words
in addition
, governors would Linking Words
much
better off importing cheap Add a missing verb
be much
cars
from other countriesUse synonyms
,
or Remove the comma
apply
bring
industrial engineering to build less pricy Wrong verb form
bringing
cars
. Use synonyms
As a result
, these items would not turn Linking Words
to
something costly to have. In general, raising income can solve Change preposition
into
this
issue immediately, which Linking Words
require
a proper country economy.
In conclusion, Correct subject-verb agreement
requires
cars
in many developing societies have Use synonyms
bought
for the Add a missing verb
been bought
first
time. It can rise Linking Words
crime
rate or make adults, especially youngsters, Correct article usage
the crime
to
limit their wants Fix the infinitive
apply
from
their future lives. Fortunately, humans leading these countries can order to reduce the cost of Change preposition
in
provide
affordable Change the verb form
providing
cars
for their Use synonyms
people
.Use synonyms
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