You recently did a short cookery course. The school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how much cooking you’ve done since the course Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer
Dear Sir,
It is informed to you that I have recently passed a culinary program at your Algonquin school.
This
course
is very useful in my life , I learn a lot of recipes during that course
classes.
Furthermore
, yesterday I organised a party for my friends and prepare all the food items at home. The curry made by me is really very delicious or a salad made with cucumber and onion with the use of lemon was also
fabulous . They appreciate the cooking skills that I learn from your school.
Additionally
, they all are interested to join this
course
and I am also
interested to join a baking course
, so I learn about cake and pastry also
. So at what time do you again start these courses please give me some details .
Yours faithfully,
Amandeep KaurSubmitted by [email protected] on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite