Economic development in countries has increased the standards of living in the cities but not the countryside. What problems could this gap bring for the whole country? How do you think these problems could be reduced?

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Economic booming is a great index of how wealthy the
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are.
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, economic prosperity in various countries results in higher
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of living in the
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while in rural areas
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have been deprived.
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of
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in suburbs, and
lack
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of
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opportunities
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have been the main issues which can be tackled by feasible solutions.
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with, one of the main problems rooted in the development of
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in
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megacities
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cities
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is
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lack
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the lack
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of
experts
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. Needless to say that higher facilities in
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absorb habitant of suburbs. When more and more
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decide to immigrate to bigger
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, rural areas become vacant
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the
experts
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in various fields
prefer
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who prefer
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living in bigger
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.
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, in
Iran
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some
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of Sistan Baloochestan have few doctors for treating sick
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since far too many of them have immigrated to Tehran to reach higher living
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. To tackle
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issue, equal distribution of the amenities and equipping
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with sufficient care system, high qualified-modern buildings and latest technologies like higher internet speed
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professionals to stay in the suburbs while they are satisfied and feel no need to immigrate.
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,
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lack
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the lack
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of
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opportunity
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opportunities
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in big
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is the
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issue.
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, as more migrants
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to
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cities
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it can be seen that the higher population
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immigrate
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, the higher rate of
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searching, so
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lack
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a lack
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of
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opportunities
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can be witnessed. To illustrate, according to a recent poll done in Italy, in big
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of Italy like Milan there are
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job
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opportunities
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compared to smaller
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cities
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cities
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like Rimini
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because various
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have immigrated to Milan while thinking they are going to
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with
higher
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a higher
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standard
living
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of living
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.
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why
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process has led to a reverse situation compared to
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. A feasible solution for
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issue is to aware
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with exact statistics
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on
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life
standards
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of the whole countries with social media to avoid daydreaming
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villagers about
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of living in
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megacities
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cities
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. To conclude,
lack
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of
experts
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in
villages
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and
lack
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of
job
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opportunities
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are the main issues caused by imbalanced immigration to
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for higher
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of living. Having identified
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this problems
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this problem
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, governments can equip
villages
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with higher
life
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living
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standards
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,and
also
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aware
people
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with facts about relaxed life in big regions to avoid immigration.

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