In many countries, crimes rate amongst younger people has been rising. Discuss the causes and solutions for this problem.

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number of

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crime

rate

in a society can be a good index of safety.

Accordingly

, numerous countries worldwide have been struggling with

increasing

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an increasing

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number of

crime

waves. Considerably

this

issue has happened because of joblessness and

internet

technology. Having identified

this

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reasons ,

government

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the government

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must take feasible solutions.

To begin

with, one of the main culprits

for

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crime

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the crime

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rate

among

adolescent

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adolescents

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is unemployment. Due to

economic

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the economic

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crisis in

the

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third

-world countries the

rate

of employment has fallen,

also

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gain

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money

through working for

living

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a living

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. While jobless adolescents have financial issues, offenders would find them as good candidates to commit crimes

such

as shoplifting or burglary,

robbery

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or robbery

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, and offer them tempting prices

that is

why we can see a large

quantity

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number

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of young

people

who become culprits. To illustrate

this

, according to a recent poll, crimes are committed mostly by

younger

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the younger

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generation due to financial problems

especially

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in countries with

low

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a low

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level

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levels

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of hiring. Being responsible for solving

this

incident,

government

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the government

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can dedicate

money

to

educate

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educating

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young

people

how

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to earn

money

by working as online freelancers since not only is it easier to earn

money

but

also

people

can have a vast online platform to choose between preferable well-paid jobs so that the

crime

rate

stems from

money

problems will decrease. Apart from unemployment,

internet

technology is another item that accounts for

crime

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rate

. Needless to say that

by

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the

emerge

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of

internet

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the internet

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people

through

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throughout

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the world can keep in touch, but it is not always for good purposes and some crimes and the process of attracting

of

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committers happen through the Net.

Although

parents might think that letting their child

to

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use

internet

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the internet

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would be beneficial, they are at the risk of joining offender comities.

For example

, there are some online groups trying to teach teenagers how to be a part of

crime

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a crime

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or even

in

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on

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web teens are paid to commit illegal tasks ranging from

rubbery

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robbery

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to

kill

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someone, so we can understand

internet

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the internet

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can be harmful if it is not controlled. One of the best solutions for

this

issue can be educating teenagers at school and

alarm

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them

for

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about

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disadvantages

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the disadvantages

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of

internet

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the internet

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and gang online groups can have plus

that

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, subsequent problems that might happen

for

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them, so

this

awareness can help them as a guide not to commit a

crime

. To conclude, there are some factors

such

as unemployment and the

internet

culprit for

increase

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an increase

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of

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in

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crime

rate

needed to

be solve

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be solved

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by educating youngsters

how

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on how

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to earn

money

as online freelancers, and awareness about

crime

groups attract youngers through

internet

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the internet

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.