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crime
rate
in a society can be a good index of safety.
Accordingly
, numerous countries worldwide have been struggling with
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number of
crime
waves. Considerably
this
issue has happened because of joblessness and
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technology. Having identified
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must take feasible solutions.
To begin
with, one of the main culprits
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rate
among
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is unemployment. Due to
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crisis in
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third
-world countries the
rate
of employment has fallen,
also
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money
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. While jobless adolescents have financial issues, offenders would find them as good candidates to commit crimes
such
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, and offer them tempting prices
that is
why we can see a large
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of young
people
who become culprits. To illustrate
this
, according to a recent poll, crimes are committed mostly by
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generation due to financial problems
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in countries with
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of hiring. Being responsible for solving
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can dedicate
money
to
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young
people
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to earn
money
by working as online freelancers since not only is it easier to earn
money
but
also
people
can have a vast online platform to choose between preferable well-paid jobs so that the
crime
rate
stems from
money
problems will decrease.
Apart from unemployment,
internet
technology is another item that accounts for
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rate
. Needless to say that
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of
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people
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the world can keep in touch, but it is not always for good purposes and some crimes and the process of attracting
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committers happen through the Net.
Although
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use
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would be beneficial, they are at the risk of joining offender comities.
For example
, there are some online groups trying to teach teenagers how to be a part of
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or even
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web teens are paid to commit illegal tasks ranging from
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to
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someone, so we can understand
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can be harmful if it is not controlled. One of the best solutions for
this
issue can be educating teenagers at school and
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, subsequent problems that might happen
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them, so
this
awareness can help them as a guide not to commit a
crime
.
To conclude, there are some factors
such
as unemployment and the
internet
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crime
rate
needed to
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by educating youngsters
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to earn
money
as online freelancers, and awareness about
crime
groups attract youngers through
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.