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Some people believe that students should be taught International news as a subject at schools. Others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays by improving technology and develop
internet
 some
parents
 prefer our heir learns anymore by taught international news as a topic at school and
this
 subject for developed countries is possible,
although
,some people do not like our children spend more
time
 whit
internet
 because they think scion be a waste of valuable school
time
. both of them talk truth.
for example
, with the
internet
 heir can develop herself-knowledge and they can find answers to each question but using a lot of nets is really perilous for them and should not spend more
time
 on the
internet
 because it is fully bad for their health.
however
, I think using a computer or laptop is essential for everyone. another hand,children and
parents
 should know for children have a lot of duties
such
 as doing exercise or playing games to keep a fit body or doing cultural work ,
for example
, going to the cinema or museum even they should know our
parents
 need to help for housework and should not all the
time
 stay in the virtual world.
As a result
,in my view students need to improve science to help the virtual world and specific
internet
 and I believe it is entirely necessary for them and
parents
 have to accept
this
 subject.
on the other hand
, students have to observe to use enough and if they can they have to divide our
time
 for all work because as you know it is not all the life.
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