You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Ask your friend to send you a particular photograph Explain why you need that particular photograph Tell your friend what happened to your copy of it Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Brendan,

Dear Brendan, I hope you are back to work from our long trip
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Bali. It was an amazing trip with those brilliant adventures we did together and a took some great pictures as well. Do you remember we captured an amazing
sunsrise
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sunrise
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background
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picture
overlooking Mt Batur
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This
is one of my favourite pictures from the trip. Can you email me the
picture
? I am in need of
this
particluar
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particular
picture
because I just cannot get
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over it
and thinking to add into my
picture
collection and as well to get it framed so I can display
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the wall in
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my bed
my
room. I ask you
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this
specific
picture
beacuse
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because
I
accidently
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deleted the copy of it from the shared files as I was going through each
picture
of our and deleting the unwanted pictures and
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it in a better way. Hoping you will mail me the
picture
as soon as you read
this
letter. Your's lovingly, Naruto
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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