Many would argue that scientific research requires a degree of oversight from the relevant governmental authorities.
Many would argue that experiences with the greatest impact occur before one becomes a youngster. In my opinion, the most pivotal stages of development in fact take place during one’s teenage years.
The argument for the primacy of childhood
life
is supported by years of psychological research. In the early 20th century, researchers such
as Jean Piaget began to analyze and perform experiments on young children in order to verify theories about how the human mind develops. Over the last
century, these studies have evolved and it is now commonly accepted in the field of psychology that very early experiences definitively shape one’s later personality and identity. This
is particularly the case when a child undergoes trauma such
as abuse or neglect at home. These children are then
more likely to have mental health disorders later in life
and suffer generally from low self-esteem.
However
, decisions made as a teenager are more directly impactful on the future. The arguments made above are compelling but also
difficult to verify beyond the purely theoretical. The choices a teenager makes have tangible effects. Most teenagers begin to settle into distinct social groups that will help inform their future identity, take up potentially lasting hobbies, choose the sports they will play later in life
, and may even decide on a future career. The experiences a teenager gains through these activities will in turn allow them to shift their focus in life
, such
as by pursuing a scientific rather than artistic field in higher education.
In conclusion, despite the research showing the impact of childhood development, there are more important practical life
choices made as a late adolescent. Therefore
, it is key that teenagers are supported fully by both parents and teachers.Submitted by uluga2002 on
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