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The Chart Shows the Components of Gdp in The Uk from 1992 to 2000

The Chart Shows the Components of Gdp in The Uk from 1992 to 2000
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The chart depicts the Gross Domestic Product (
GDP
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) from the IT and
Service
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industry
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 from the year 1992 to 2000 in the United Kingdom.
Overall
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,
GDP
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 from the IT
sector
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 remained higher than the
Service
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industry
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 from 1992 to 2000.
Initially
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, the
difference
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 between
both
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 sectors was limited;
however
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, in later years, the
difference
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 was much more than in the past. In 1992,
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GDP
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the GDP
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 from IT was around 6%,
whereas
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, from the
service
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sector
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, it was 4%. In 1994, in the IT
sector
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, it
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 nearly 8%, and in the
service
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industry
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, it reached above 6%. In the year 1996, there was a minimal
difference
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 in the
GDP
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 from
both
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 industries (
both
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 were between 6 to 8%). From 1998, the
difference
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 between
both
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 sectors in terms of
GDP
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 became more noticeable and continued in the year 2000. In 1998, the
GDP
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 of the IT
industry
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 was 12%, just a little less than 8% for the
service
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sector
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. In 2000, the IT
sector
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’s
GDP
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 rose more than 14% whilst for the
Service
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sector
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 it remained near 8% only.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words gdp, service, industry, sector, difference, both with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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