Univwersities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is told that the same
number
of boys
and girls
should be admitted to any university
subject. I generally believe that if an equal number
of genders enter university
majors, the students
will compete, and they can be given a chance to pursue their desired fields at universities
.
Firstly
, by being an equal number
of boys
and girls
in a major in a university
, a competition may begin among them. As it is known, males and females have different abilities and attitudes. So they always want to prove their qualification over each other. This
view leads to the creation of competition among them. For example
, in a sport
class, Change the noun form
sports
both
boys
and girls
may make more endeavors
to defeat the other gender. The mentioned competition between Change the spelling
endeavours
boys
and girls
can be regarded as a useful thing improving the knowledge level of a university
.
Secondly
, students
can continue their desired majors in universities
. If the capacities of any university
expand equally for both
genders, students
will enter to
a field which is thrilling for them. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, In my country, architecture is a favorite
major, Change the spelling
favourite
although
universities
accept higher
Add an article
a higher
number
of girls
than boys
. By giving an equal chance for both
males and females to study what they want in university
, the possibility of their successes
is increased
In conclusion, I think an equal Fix the agreement mistake
success
number
of both
girls
and boys
should be accepted to any major in universities
since universities
place in a higher world ranking and students
are given a chance to study their desired major at university
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