The car is a disastrous 20th Century invention that has made the world’s cities more dangerous and polluted, as well as being responsible for the deaths of millions of people in accidents. Do you agree or disagree?

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not only are not safe to use but

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are responsible for

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.

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several attempts have been done to increase

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' safety and make them zero

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emission

emissions

, I am convinced that a great

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of humans are still dying in

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accidents

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annually and even modern vehicles generate

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amount of harmful

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. There is a huge improvement in

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car

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manufacturing since it was introduced to the world for the

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time.

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, many safety options have been added to

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to make them reliable like seat belts and

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airbags

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air bags

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airbags

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, which have decreased the death tolls compared to a hundred years ago.

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, electric

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have been designed to reduce

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exhaust fumes and it was told that

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new generation of

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will revolutionise

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industry. Despite the above so-called developments,

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that is

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being produced by

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is irrefutable. A great

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of petrol

cars

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are still being used around the world. They are generating a great

amount

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of exhaust fumes with burning oil which is directly released into the atmosphere and is detrimental

for

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human health.

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problem is even greater in developing countries where

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low quality

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oil is being used which produces even more dangerous fumes that can contribute to respiratory diseases like asthma.

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,

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electric

cars

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have not been successful to eliminate

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pollution

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.

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is because the means for generating the electricity needed for them to run

also

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produce

pollution

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.

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,

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still are playing an integral role in making the environment polluted.

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, the reports show that the

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of people who were killed in road

accidents

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is significant. In spite of all the efforts being done by companies like Benz and BMW, there are still factors that lead to

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.

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, poor

roads

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conditions and impaired drivers are factors that can result in

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regardless of how the

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is conforming

standards

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.

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,

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accidents

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are still responsible for many casualties. To sum up, though advanced

cars

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have been successful to reduce the

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of deaths and

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compared to the past, one can say that

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still cause enormous yearly deaths and

pollution

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. I believe that the

pollution

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that

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petrol

cars

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and generating electricity produce plus other factors involved in

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accidents

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make

cars

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a dangerous and detrimental invention.