Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Environmental problems are enhancing signi9 in day today. Wherever some
group
of people declare that the main environmental problem is the extinction of natural creatures while others argue that there are other environmental issues in Fix the agreement mistake
groups
this
current period. This
essay will focus on these both statements and I will elaborate on my opinion too.
To begin
with, nowadays, animals
and plants are hunted in a
illegal way by hunters or other people. Change the article
an
Consequently
, in Correct article usage
the wild
Correct your spelling
wildlife
wild life
the majority of forest Correct your spelling
wildlife
animals
have extinct and this
critical difficulty paves the route to imbalance
of our living beings in the environment. Add an article
an imbalance
the imbalance
For example
, when lions have faced extinction, we unable
to control Add a missing verb
are unable
population
of deers, Add an article
the population
a population
cattles
and other Correct your spelling
castles
cattle
animals
. As a result
, particularly, these animals
Add a missing verb
have grown
grown
in Wrong verb form
grow
Correct your spelling
overpopulation
over population
rates and it creates considerable competition for foods, places and water among other wild creatures Correct your spelling
overpopulation
in
our planet. Especially, if we Change preposition
on
loss
our Replace the word
lose
animals
and plants , unless we able
to create medicine products and other convenient requirements.
Add a missing verb
are able
On the other hand
, wherever some mankinds
emphasize environment Correct your spelling
mankind's
pollution
is the one of the most essential problem
in Change to a plural noun
problems
this
era. Particularly, global warming have
become a serious threat Change the verb form
has
for
our Change preposition
to
living-beings
. Correct your spelling
living beings
For instance
, when there is
high-temperature rates in some countries, Change the verb form
are
this
detrimental effect make
wildfires dramatically which become more distractive for wild creatures. Change the verb form
makes
Moreover
, water pollution
, air pollution
and notice pollution
have become major sorts in this
current world. Thus
, these bad effects become reasons to damage coral reefs and also
high rates of natural disasters like tsunami
, drought and so on.
In conclusion, from my perspective , I agree partially with both views. Admittedly, in Fix the agreement mistake
tsunamis
this
contemporary era, we all face these two major effects in our lives. unless we do not get necessary
steps , we cannot alleviate these causes and Correct article usage
the necessary
also
I believe government
and other world reputed companies Correct article usage
the government
also
want to give their more concern about this
, to tackle immediately.Submitted by skrodrigo030 on
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