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Computers have become so advanced and interactive that students in the future will have no need for a human educator in the classroom. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

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Nowadays,
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 play a significant role in educating enlistment
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 that one is permitted to nurse the thought that over time and with advancement in computer technology, the need for human educators will be negligible or non-existent. I,
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, disagree with
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 assumption. The reasons behind my thinking will be explained in the essay below. The importance of
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 in modern-day learning for
students
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, and even going forward, cannot be over-emphasized, as it has made learning very flexible.
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, learning with
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 can be done even outside the classrooms, at home etc. ,
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, it will be preposterous to think that without
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, the advantage seen with computer learning will be possible.
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 , being the creator of
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 are already equipped with the knowledge of its operability
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 that it can be put to full use to ensure that it becomes advantageous in enhancing or easing the acquisition of knowledge for
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.
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, it takes a human to know that the computer can be used for distance learning,
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, creating the set-up to ensure
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. Again, the maintenance or upgrading of
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 to improve their suitability for learning can only be achieved with
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.
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, the improvement and flexibility we see with
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 nowadays with respect to their proficiency as a learning tool for
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 were only made possible by
humans
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.
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, in itself, has made
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 to be seen as generally useful in training
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. In conclusion, even though
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 will continue to be useful in the learning process for
students
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, they will never replace the role of
humans
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 in teaching
students
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.
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 has been discussed in the essay above.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • human interaction
  • relationship-building
  • adaptability
  • learning styles
  • moral guidance
  • ethical guidance
  • social skills
  • emotional support
  • critical thinking
  • creativity
  • technological advancements
  • artificial intelligence
  • personalized learning
  • human touch
  • motivation
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