Some parents think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. . Others think they should begin after 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Formal higher level of
education
is a crucial step in Use synonyms
childrens’
educational life. Change noun form
children’s
Accordingly
, it is Linking Words
affairing
by some people that it should start as soon as possible, whereas others claim that it should start after Correct your spelling
affirming
affairs
age
7. From my point of view, it is more beneficial if Use synonyms
this
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education
gets started after passing 7 Use synonyms
years
old.
It is asserted that starting Use synonyms
school
after Use synonyms
age
7 is more practical as Use synonyms
children
undergo less Use synonyms
stress
. Having finished the primary stages of Use synonyms
brain
advancement till 7 Use synonyms
years
old, Use synonyms
child’s
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a child’s
brain
is ready to start schooling .Needless to say that while a child is rising, their mind is passing the Use synonyms
process
in which visual, and comprehension level is developing. Use synonyms
This
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process
is at its most level until the Use synonyms
age
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7
Change preposition
of 7
,
when a child can comprehend almost all aspects of lessons, so they will not have Remove the comma
apply
stress
during formal Use synonyms
education
. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
children
less Use synonyms
that
7 Correct your spelling
than
years
old at Use synonyms
school
can not comprehend lessons as they are complicated for their Use synonyms
brain
, and hard to analyse so they get Use synonyms
Use synonyms
stress
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stressed
In addition
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age
7 is the time when Use synonyms
children
are more independent. Compared to a3-5 year-old Use synonyms
children
, a Use synonyms
7 year old
one hasAdd a hyphen
7-year-old
Add an article
a
independency
, so the stage of starting Correct your spelling
independence
school
is easier since the child Use synonyms
do
not ask for Change the verb form
does
parents
Use synonyms
sitting
beside them .If they were infants, they would ask for meeting Change the verb form
to sit
parents
all the time. Use synonyms
For instance
, in kindergarten Linking Words
children
cry more asking to join their Use synonyms
parents
which Use synonyms
makes
Change the verb form
make
learning
Correct article usage
the learning
process
harder.
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On the other hand
, some argue that it is better to start schooling at early Linking Words
ages
due to faster learning speed in childhood. Fix the agreement mistake
age
In other words
, since childhood is a time when acquiring knowledge like learning a foreign language is faster (Linking Words
Use synonyms
brain
has its highest performance), some Add an article
the brain
parents
prefer to start schooling in small Use synonyms
ages
to gain out of Fix the agreement mistake
age
this
golden period. It has Linking Words
witnessed
among small Add a missing verb
been witnessed
children
who wanted to learn a new language, only after a few repetitions they can talk easily while older ones consider Use synonyms
this
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process
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as
a hard way.
In conclusion, Change preposition
apply
Although
it is believed by some people that starting Linking Words
school
at early Use synonyms
ages
could be practical because of faster learning speed during childhood, the idea that having formal Fix the agreement mistake
age
education
after 7 Use synonyms
years
old has better consequences because of less Use synonyms
stress
and independency of Use synonyms
children
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