Most people say that in order for one to be fluent in a language, they must live and work for sometime in that Country. Do you agree/disagree?

Achieving fluency in a
language
can be difficult
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say the least. Some say that to truly become fluent one must have lived or worked in a
country
, in which the
language
is spoken. In my opinion,
this
is not essential to master the
language
but it would
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the process. Languages can be learned from all over the globe.
For instance
, children with parents from two different countries usually learn both, their
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father's
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and their
mothers
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mother's
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language
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. In
such
cases, it is not necessary for the child to live in the
country
to become fluent.
In other words
, becoming fluent in a
language
is about
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exposure
to said
languge
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language
. If somebody works hard enough, it is likely that they become fluent in a
langauge
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language
, regardless of where they are.
However
, living or working in a
country
which speaks the
language
will aid in learning it. For
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example
, if somebody moves to a different
country
, they are likely more inclined to master the local
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young
. Due to them needing to communicate with the locals.
Furthermore
, they would
also
come into more frequent contact with the
language
.
Therefore
, getting a better understanding faster. In conclusion, while it is not essential to work or live in a
country
to become fluent, it may aid in the process. Whilst becoming fluent in a
language
can be extremely difficult, it can be done.
Although
,
this
requires a lot of hard and
consistant
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consistent
constant
work.
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