At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Young
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The young
generation
has always been vital for all societies
. Accordingly
, the number of young
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the young
generation
is more than older
one in the present. I am convinced that having more young Correct article usage
the older
people
is beneficial for a
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apply
society
.
On the positive side, younger
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the younger
generation
work
better than old Change the verb form
works
people
. Needless to say that the younger a generation
is , the better workforce it has. and as a
result
the Add a comma
,result
society
can develop in various fields ranging from sports to economic
. Take Portugal as an example, Ronaldo a football player who was a young guy started playing football and by his Replace the word
economics
effort
the name of his county has become famous, and almost Add a comma
,effort
every one
has known the country because of him. An example Replace the word
everyone
for
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of
economic
development of a country is China with a plethora of young Add an article
the economic
people
who are eager to work for long hours, and due to their effort China has become one of the well -known
countries for technology like digital devices like cellphones, so by selling more products the country has become rich and more level of wealth and ease can be witnessed among Correct your spelling
well-known
folk
of Add an article
the folk
this
nation.it plays a crucial in individuals
lives.
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individuals'
individual's
On the other hand
, the government of older societies
does not need to dedicate money
on
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to
education
sector which can be extremely costly. Needless to say that having Correct article usage
the education
young
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a young
generation
, a plethora of money
should be dedicated for
their education from the very beginning day of school. Not only is Change preposition
to
this
costly but also
time catching, while in older societies
it can be dedicated to other sections like sustainable designing to reduce needed energy for
instance, Germany has Add the comma(s)
,for
majority
of old Add an article
the majority
a majority
people
and put effort and money
in energy
sector, so Add an article
the energy
this
society
has developed significantly in this
field.
To conclude, positive sides of younger having better work forces
, and Correct your spelling
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a
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society
with higher
level of wealth, while older Add an article
a higher
societies
can dedicate money
on
other sectors and Change preposition
to
develop
. From my point of view, Replace the word
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younger
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the younger
generation
is more fruitful.Submitted by shahlad on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...