In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The available and progressive technology may lead to
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the
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physical
versions of
books
or
newspapers
. In my opinion,
this
can lead to decrease significantly the usage of printed
books
and
newspapers
but has
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negative effect on study rate in
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society
.
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the easy access to technology for the major populace and wide range of
books
,
newspapers
and data available on the internet, can lead to
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of the
prited
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printed
books
and
newspapers
.
For example
, for buying a book some
peaple
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people
have to seek in various library or bookshops to find the specific book or same for a newspaper, but by using
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and some clicks they can find the electronic version.
Moreover
,
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other things
other thing
that
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increased the interest in using the electronic versions is that most of them are available freely. We can analyze
this
from two aspects;
first
, easier and faster availability to electronic
books
and news can lead to increase the interest of
studing
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studying
and reading in
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people
specially
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younger ones.
Second
, using
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printed
books
and
newspapers
can stop cutting trees and natural wealth
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distribution
. In conclusion,
although
using
electronic
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the electronic
an electronic
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version
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of
books
and
newspapers
can lead to hurt the print system and companies but
this
is the technology progression cost and
also
help plants to stay alive.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancements
  • Digital content
  • Environmental concerns
  • Tactile experience
  • Production costs
  • Distribution costs
  • Digital divide
  • Digital fatigue
  • Print media
  • Credibility
  • Permanence
  • Collectibility
  • Aesthetic value
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