Question: Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

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contemporary
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,
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is imposed by the government with the
guidence
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guidance
of
professinals
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professionals
and is being collected in every part of the world. A part of
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society believes that
money
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earned by them should be kept to themselves and should not contribute any
money
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to
tax
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. I strongly disagree
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this
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statment
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statement
and let us discuss the possible outcomes and thoughts in the following essay.
Although
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tax
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paying is very much important, most
people
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avoid paying and
hence
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use the
money
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for
betterment
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of themselves. It is an individual's duty and
responsibilty
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responsibility
to pay a set percentage of income in the form of
tax
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. Many countries have different
percentage
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percentages
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of
tax
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to be collected based on their income earned and spending capacity.
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, According to
government
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the government
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of India,
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a persons
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persons
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income below 500,000/- is about 3% of
tax
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whereas
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where as
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whereas
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people
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earning more
money
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has
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have
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a higher chance of paying
tax
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.
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, paying
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tax
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taxes
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has been ignored by wealthy and
well educated
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people
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.
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is mostly because
money
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earned by them is not basically contrasting with government policy and
this
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burden is paid by
middle
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the middle
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class and lower earned
individual's
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individuals
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.
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paying of
tax
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will tend to
inflatation
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inflation
and resulting to pay more than of asking price. Regular
payment
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of
tax
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can lead to much better infrastructures
such
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as better connectivity in roads,
advance
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facility in
healthcare
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the healthcare
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sector and
using
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of better technology all these factors will lead contribute to a
nations
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GDP (Gross Dometic Product). Tracking
tax
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payment
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payments
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using better technology by private and public
instutations
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institutions
can lead to regular
payment
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in
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and the ones ignoring should be punished and set an
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for those who are unwilling to pay. To conclude, paying
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tax
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taxes
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is a right of
person
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the person
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who can contribute towards the better progress
towards
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of
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nation
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the nation
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and
people
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ignoring
tax
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payment
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should
be enlighten
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about its importance
an
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and
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brought to justice.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • contribute
  • welfare
  • public services
  • progressive taxation
  • distribution of wealth
  • civic duty
  • social cohesion
  • tax evasion
  • economic disparities
  • social unrest
  • individual rights
  • societal responsibilities
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