Question: Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?
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era
tax
is imposed by the government with the Use synonyms
guidence
of Correct your spelling
guidance
professinals
and is being collected in every part of the world. A part of Correct your spelling
professionals
a
society believes that Remove the article
apply
money
earned by them should be kept to themselves and should not contribute any Use synonyms
money
to Use synonyms
tax
. I strongly disagree Use synonyms
to
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with
this
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statment
and let us discuss the possible outcomes and thoughts in the following essay.
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statement
Although
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tax
paying is very much important, most Use synonyms
people
avoid paying and Use synonyms
hence
use the Linking Words
money
for Use synonyms
betterment
of themselves. It is an individual's duty and Add an article
the betterment
responsibilty
to pay a set percentage of income in the form of Correct your spelling
responsibility
tax
. Many countries have different Use synonyms
percentage
of Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
tax
to be collected based on their income earned and spending capacity. Use synonyms
For instance
, According to Linking Words
government
of India, Add an article
the government
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a persons
persons
income below 500,000/- is about 3% of Change noun form
person's
tax
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whereas
where as
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whereas
people
earning more Use synonyms
money
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has
a higher chance of paying Correct subject-verb agreement
have
tax
.
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Nevertheless
, paying Linking Words
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tax
has been ignored by wealthy and Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
well educated
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well-educated
people
. Use synonyms
This
is mostly because Linking Words
money
earned by them is not basically contrasting with government policy and Use synonyms
this
burden is paid by Linking Words
middle
class and lower earned Correct article usage
the middle
individual's
. Change the noun form
individuals
individual
As not
paying of Change preposition
Not
tax
will tend to Use synonyms
inflatation
and resulting to pay more than of asking price. Regular Correct your spelling
inflation
payment
of Use synonyms
tax
can lead to much better infrastructures Use synonyms
such
as better connectivity in roads, Linking Words
advance
facility in Replace the word
advanced
healthcare
sector and Add an article
the healthcare
using
of better technology all these factors will lead contribute to a Replace the word
use
nations
GDP (Gross Dometic Product). Tracking Change noun form
nation's
tax
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payment
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payments
instutations
can lead to regular Correct your spelling
institutions
payment
in Use synonyms
tax
and the ones ignoring should be punished and set an Use synonyms
examples
for those who are unwilling to pay.
To conclude, paying Correct the article-noun agreement
example
Use synonyms
tax
is a right of Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
person
who can contribute towards the better progress Add an article
the person
a person
towards
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of
nation
and Correct article usage
the nation
people
ignoring Use synonyms
tax
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payment
should Use synonyms
be enlighten
about its importance Change the verb form
be enlightened
an
brought to justice.Correct your spelling
and
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite