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It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The issue of searching for
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 on
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-based has been controversial. Some people believe that the
internet
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 is not an excellent
platform
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 to search for
information
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, whereas I agree with those who think that the
internet
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 is one communication
platform
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 which can be reliable. On the one hand, it is commonly believed that a lot of
information
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 on the
internet
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 is fake. One of the most important reasons is that the
internet
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 is an open
platform
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 that anyone can access since a huge amount of
data
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 has been posted on without accurate resources or references.
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, according to the latest survey conducted by Bangkok University, it revealed that 80% of study reports of high school students in Bangkok who have proceeded by individual or group tend to have unreliable references from online access. Having said that, the
internet
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 is not an excellent academic source.
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, it seems to me that the
internet
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 is the best searching machine and it
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 is an excellent communication
platform
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. The most significant reason is the fact that people can alternate the
information
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 from a reliable source with their own knowledge. To illustrate
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, in recent news, it has been reported that 80% of postgraduate research students tend to choose searching
data
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 from trustworthy databases. I agree with
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 point because the
internet
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 enables finding
information
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 easier, and faster and saves time. In conclusion, considering both sides of
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 issue,
although
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 there is a lot of untrustworthy
data
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 on the
internet
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, I agree with those who think that the
internet
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 is the best place to find
information
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,
however
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, considering resources of
information
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 must be done.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Democratize access
  • Instant messaging
  • Real-time conversations
  • Credible sources
  • Misinformation
  • Unverified facts
  • Reputable news outlets
  • Biased opinions
  • Algorithm-driven content
  • Overreliance
  • Traditional methods
  • Search engines
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