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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.otgers argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Give your opinion.

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people argue that we should take part in poor circumstances like
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 issues and lack of
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money problem. While others declare
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 is important to try again and to develop our skills.
This
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To begin
 with, in
this
 contemporary world, human
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 more and more detrimental effects in their life because of
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unsatisfactory
works
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. Even though currently,
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unemployed rate is increased enormously. Due to
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 employers try to satisfy
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their carrier which
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 them to overcome financial problems and fulfil needs and requirements
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regularly.
For example
, African people are fed by world reputed organizations because of the scary food products and poor
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. When sometimes we have to
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 money problems and
consequently
, the
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majority
 of them always become frustrating. Certainly, without any hesitation and
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, we have a chance to accept these issues and we would try to save money in a good
way
.
On the other hand
, some communities are able to improve their skills and positive thoughts when
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such
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 tasks in their lives.
Furthermore
, without quite these
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unsatisfied
 factors, believe in themselves to change these in a better
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 their hard work.
For instance
, workers who are not capable in their business sectors,
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are trying to get courses to develop their knowledge.
Therefore
, it paves the
way
 to get success wherever they would easily able to get
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 position in their field. In conclusion, from my perspective, I believe
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both statements are productive
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 human activities. Unless we lose our great opportunities, we are able to get more and more chances to build our lives in a better
way
. Wherever we always try to become a derivative and hard worker, one day definitely we would have space to get more and more achievements in our endeavour.
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