Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
The issue of
violence
is as old as time itself. The first
time many of us are confronted with violence
is often during childhood. This
essay will discuss the importance of teaching children
the right way of dealing with these situations
. Fighting fire with fire,
tends to result in a bigger fire.
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Violence
can have drastic consequences. For instance
, I have once observed a bully getting his nose broken by his initial victim. In this
case, the initial victim actually got into more trouble. This
illustrates how responding to violence
can escalate the situation for the victim, even if he or she was acting in self-defence. When we act in anger, we tend to act irrationally leading to actions we may regret afterwards. In such
scenarios, it is often best to walk away and let a third
-party deal with the bully.
It is important for children
to form good habits before entering adulthood. For example
, if someone is not tought
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thought
violence
as a child, they likely
to have trouble dealing with similar Add a missing verb
are likely
situations
in the future. In addition
, children
tend to enjoy less-harsh consequences, which is not the case for adults. This
is why its
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situations
in life, often benefiting the one that acted like the "bigger person"
In conclusion, this
essay has explored two reasons for parents to teach their children
not to hit back bullies
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at bullies
However
, this
may not be the correct way of dealing with all situations
. Many of us will have with
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violence
throughout our lives. It is essential to be prepared for the worse.Submitted by nikolaus.a.zach on
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