Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

The issue of
violence
is as old as time itself. The
first
time many of us are confronted with
violence
is often during childhood.
This
essay will discuss the importance of teaching
children
the right way of dealing with these
situations
. Fighting fire with fire
,
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tends to result in a bigger fire.
Violence
can have drastic consequences.
For instance
, I have once observed a bully getting his nose broken by his initial victim. In
this
case, the initial victim actually got into more trouble.
This
illustrates how responding to
violence
can escalate the situation for the victim, even if he or she was acting in self-defence. When we act in anger, we tend to act irrationally leading to actions we may regret afterwards. In
such
scenarios, it is often best to walk away and let a
third
-party deal with the bully. It is important for
children
to form good habits before entering adulthood.
For example
, if someone is not
tought
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taught
thought
how to deal with
violence
as a child, they
likely
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to have trouble dealing with similar
situations
in the future.
In addition
,
children
tend to enjoy less-harsh consequences, which is not the case for adults.
This
is why
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necessary that we understand, though it might be hard sometimes, that walking away from
situations
of
this
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is often the better choice.
This
is a skill that
transfares
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transfers
to many
situations
in life, often benefiting the one that acted like the "bigger person" In conclusion,
this
essay has explored two reasons for parents to teach their
children
not to hit back
bullies
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.
However
,
this
may not be the correct way of dealing with all
situations
. Many of us will have
with
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violence
throughout our lives. It is essential to be prepared for the worse.
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